Vacation Abroad or Domestic
Nowadays, vacation is something necessary. It could help us back to our 100% condition, relax our mind, and refresh our body. Many options in going vacation, in general, they are separated by 2 options, they are abroad or domestic. The purpose of this essay is to compare those options.
First, let us talk about vacation abroad. Vacation abroad needs much money for buying airplane ticket, getting passport, reserving hotel, and buying souvenir. The advantages of vacation abroad are we visit other countries, it could add our knowledge about their traditions, cultures, and habits and we could meet people from other countries.
Second, let us talk about vacation domestic or local vacation. Vacation domestic needs less money for airplane ticket, hotel, and buying souvenir. We do not need a passport. The advantages of vacation domestic are we can know more about our country, so we can more appreciate more our country and our cultures and it needs less money.In conclusion, vacation abroad or domestic are help us back to our 100% condition, to relax our mind, and to refresh our body, so if you have much money you can go abroad for vacation or if you have less money you can choose vacation domestic.
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BalasHapusso far your essay is good enough,,
but keep pay attention about grammar, diction and punctuation mark,,,
that's from me!!
keep writing!!
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BalasHapusthat is good essay!!
keep writing!!!
its better if you put some photos def :)
BalasHapusi want to vacation abroad.
BalasHapusi think Paris is good, would you to pay me def?
it is better if we vacation in domestic first. Because our country has so many beautiful and great tourism objects :) keep writing, boy! :)
BalasHapusplease put some photos, in order to be more interesting.... :)
BalasHapushahhaa....great!! But, It's better for me if you put the photo of Japan. ahahhaaa......cause I want to go there soon...whohoho.....
BalasHapusbut i like France the most.
BalasHapus